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RE: The Genesis: A Bunch Of Young Punks

in #movies7 years ago

Great post, as I’m a a lifelong punk rocker and also a fan of the movie. But I have to give you some constructive criticism, being a writer myself.

Try formatting a bit better. Mainly, break it up into paragraphs. It would make reading a lot easier and more people might take the time to read the entire article/post.

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Tbh, I didn't expect anyone to read it. I sort of started writing and let it flow.

That’s cool, too.