If I saw this tweet show up, I would likely ignore it. It has a very spammy look to it. Similar to the Discord messages you get that you won 0.1 BTC.

Your audience is likely only Hive users, so it isn't a huge concern, but if you just glance at it without really reading the words, you might see what I mean.

When at all possible, I try to use natural conversation in my interactions, it avoids the mental spam filter.