THE PRETTY STRANGER
It was evening
I was going back home in a bus
Then there she stood, waving at the bus
The driver stopped and opened the door
Man has anyone ever dazzled that bright?
It was a bit dark but she shined so bright
Beauty was so clear that everyone else
Looked blur
Eyes so bright they sparkled like diamonds
In a show glass
Smile so wide enough to contain the whole earth
Teeth whiter than chalks
Skin smooth and dazzled like gold
Perfume so nice like white romance
She lit the whole bus like it was the 4th of July
She then sat beside me, smiled and said hi
I couldn't reply cos I was lost and high,
I was texting on the phone but lost concentration
And couldn't reply because she was so damn beautiful
Mehn, she dazzled.
Now i'm back home thinking of a million things
I would have said to her
But couldn't because she made me speechless
Thinking of the next time I might meet her again
But might not, because I was so lost in her gaze
That I forget to create and start a conversation
Now am here sitting on my couch thinking
What could have came over me?
Was it a spell lol, yeah may be she had
A spell casted with that smile.
Well until the universe brings us in contact
Again
Farewell my pretty stranger
Love from @fantomcee 😊
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Beautiful piece dearie
Thanks hon
Nice one...the words were arranged perfectly well
Aww I had help tho
But thanks
This is really beautiful! Did that really just happen, or is it a fictional poem?
It actually did happen
But I added some fiction, but most part are true and happened to ne
Aw. That's too bad you got tongue-tied. She must have been really beautiful. Next time you see a beautiful girl and you freeze up, just look her in the eye and make something up like, "Hey, I know you. How do you like Professor so-and-so's econ class? Isn't it brutal?"
And then she'll be like "what?"
And then you can say, "Oh, I thought you were in my business program at the university. It's a big class. You look a lot like one of the girls in there. Only a lot prettier."
And then, you got to pay her a compliment AND get in a little piece about how you're in business at university.
I know, it's a total gimmick, but you could totally pull it off.
Don't say, "Do I know you?" Just act like you already do. It'll throw her off.
Wow thanks for the tip
Am definitely gonna try this out lol
Now you why I said I have a great friend
Also, hopefully you can make it to my show today! Free SBD giveaways in prizes!
https://steemit.com/steemstar/@littlescribe/free-sbd-dear-littlescribe-streaming-live-today
Am sorry i couldn't make it @littlescribe i was preparing to go back to school
Plus i ran out of data