The interminable stars
original poetry
Conceived and penned in vain,
Not the stars among them:
The indomitable stars ring clear
With their love song of remembering.
Remembering everything
Pressed down by their glassy heft,
Pulled up by their shining minds
To our empyrean motherland.
Seeing everything we left behind
Out there on the shattered islands,
The ballistic villages of yore
Where we loved and fought
And laughed—
Remembering everything,
Everything.
Splitting memories, in
The trillion scenes, that
Carve clefts through sanity
And unfasten the heartclasps,
The interminable stars.
Teachers and lovers all,
They whisper, below the grey roar
Of the cities' cursèd light, every story
In the book of life they scream
Into the blessèd night.
Written by
@d-pend
2/15/18
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Art by
.1 - - - "Space" by Altalamatox [cropped]
2 - - - "Space book" by Amuuna [cropped]
2 - - - "Space scene" by Kamikaye
Beyond an Awesome poem..."Splitting memories..."@d-pend my favorite part. Made me think though, that in all our lives, our yes(s) and our no(s) in life create this carved passage in our minds through sanity that...whomever is at the end of the tunnel is your true self! Which in turn "...unfastens the heartsclasps."@d-pend #myinterpretation #stayhumble
Thanks for transferring such a vibrant image about the passage. Your interpretation is welcome anytime @cesarlrossi! I'm glad you got something from the piece.
Thank you
Thank you for the beautiful poem.
It makes me homesick. I am at my mother in law's house in the Korean countryside but I would like to be in Chicago.
There is a bigger homesickness. It is from our great origins. Although we are made from dust, it is stardust. We are all connected. And we long to go back there.
Thanks for sharing this poem which makes me think about my existence and humbles me before the canopy of the heavens.
This one was on another level. Was something.... I can't really describe to be honest. The way you tell a story, the imagery... It's just, man. Very nice.
@d-pend, You giving most inspiration poem this time. I love these contribution too. Absolutely expand love via our soul. That's deeply meaningful thoughts created. You expand my spirit long way going across The interminable stars. I have to tell all you're exactly creative in this platform. For peoples love each others and try to win love someone in this world. Your poetry bringing me my past memorable history of love. It's absolutely awesome memory indeed. I remembered it much. Colorful digital arts going be delightful your blog. Exactly carrying me deepest mind. Thanks for inspiration.
Basically I'm so exciting now with your heart soul poetry. Definitely best creativity using across talented and native skills. You motivated me and I admire you @d-pend. Nice to decided you share to steemians. Best wishes.
Absolutely wonderful! I don't have the words like you and others have, but I certainly appreciate your incredible poetry!
that which shines more than the others,
the one that lights my nights
when nostalgia embraces me.
My star,
which is always there for me,
in the difficult moments,
Today I dedicate these verses to you
even if you are always
in the sky....
beautiful poetry is a pleasure to follow you
Very good poem @d-pend, "The interminable stars". Words that have profound meaning, words to which are filled with the beauty of love. Like the beauty of the flickering stars in the silent midnight. I have also posted a poem about "The beauty of the moon".
You will always be a teacher to me, where I am to learn to write a poem, because you are the one who made me become the spirit and continue to write poetry. Thank you and hope you will always be the moon that shines on my night in the dark.... :)
star stars always blink when the eve of the night, the star of life, the giver of light in the night, illuminates every depressed soul
I Loved it, please continue doing things like this. Personally, I've never been much of a poet myself. I'd like to give it an opportunity, of course, because a writer should always read everything. I was actually reading The Iliad, but it's costing me.
I'm following you now :)
you're always mixed between magic and feelings when i was read this poem i felt like you build for us a new world i faded on it
After all stanzas remembering everything wording looks awesome
Beautiful poem and beautiful picture. This part of the poem:
makes me think about this:
The poem is very nice, very place in understanding every word per word, thanks for a very useful post for renungi, thank for sharing and very useful. @d-pend
Another an essence of the poetry by one of the finest poets of the community, we are proud of you Daniel <3
The way you put positive energy among your reads is really really appreciable and i have massive respect for your deep poetry my spiritual brother <3 like these lines are more than awesome for me <3
How lovely way to convey the point of discussion :) :)
P.S: Sorry for late reply as i was busy in writing my blog
Teachers and lovers all,
They whisper, below the grey roar
Of the cities' cursèd light, every story
In the book of life they scream
Into the blessèd night.
This one is certainly Like honey dipped into a milk shake, I mean I felt the telepathic movement if this stanza here, it's like you were connecting I felt this sexual swerve pull up in me, lol you know I did.
Your ability to make words have effect on a reader is such a magnificent tool it shows heights of total mastery.
This one is sweetly written, and sweetly felt deep down in my heart, well done buddy.
Excellent poetry.
You are very creative.
I wonder how did you create poem daily?
Very beautiful wording , good poem
Sublime penning, d-pend:)
Teachers and lovers all,
They whisper, below the grey roar
Of the cities' cursèd light, every story
In the book of life they scream
Into the blessèd night
Awesome poetry my favorite stanza from your poetry
You are a great poet keep it up
Thanks for sharing
Splitting memories, in
The trillion scenes, that
Carve clefts through sanity
And unfasten the heartclasps,
The interminable stars.
Fantastic lines...
It added another feather to the crown @d-pend👍
What a wonderful poetry my friend, i adore it
Thnks for reading it @soufiani :-)
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could you tell me the meaning of this poem?
I feel you are writing this poem with inner strength.
This is so amazing poem.
thanks @d-pend
This poetry is obviusly great & an educative value us.It is motivted all steemians.
Thank you very much.
@Resteem & follow done.
Though sometimes It becomes hard for me to understand some English words but definitely it is worth reading poetry. One can feel the feelings.
All there is unconditional love. All else is an illusion.
anather lovely poem i seee here sir @d-pand
its Beauty
Resteem
exquisite d-pend :)
The poem is full of meaning, I enjoy him, at the moment are hard I often hear poetry and song for the relief of distress
Thanks for sharing @d-pend
Nice poetry good content Hope you will share more thanks
wow very nice post i like you..
Wow its really beautiful and amazing poetry. I appreciate you. Best wishes for future.
Nice post
Your poem writing quality is great. very nice poem.
very nice poem thanks for share please upvote my blog @momin109
beautiful.. I love the pictures too.
Amazing poem just wonderful sir. Thanks for sharing with us
@upvtoed
good poetry I love the pictures too
good
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Hello I am new here and I recently started writing and I think this is a brilliant. You can read some of my stuff at @osasuj.
Very nice poem full of feelings, I really admire it.
Hi!! I really liked your writing! I'm thinking about starting a contest for both poets and musicians who'd like to join and make some art together! If you like the idea, I'd love to know and for you to spread the word around the writers' community ♥
Love!
Carla
impresionante
Wow just came across your blog. I must say your organization is incredible and attractive
@d-pend Seeing everything we left behind
Out there on the shattered islands,
The ballistic villages of yore
Where we loved and fought
And laughed—
This lines made it to my heart really it is hard to express so much in such a short poem and I see you have that capability liked your poem truly you are genius !!
Tremendous poem ...! I do not know if I like the images or the poem more ... Excellent.