So, here's what I think: I agree with @kaylinart, the post is beautiful!
This is my advice and take it with a grain of salt:
I think that should put a lot of spacing between the paragraphs, many readers these days avoid long paragraphs as before and we have to adapt to the new rules.
You can see in Neil Strauss style up in the article, or James Altucher..etc. small sentences, and it could go a long way! :)
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So, here's what I think: I agree with @kaylinart, the post is beautiful!
This is my advice and take it with a grain of salt:
I think that should put a lot of spacing between the paragraphs, many readers these days avoid long paragraphs as before and we have to adapt to the new rules.
You can see in Neil Strauss style up in the article, or James Altucher..etc. small sentences, and it could go a long way! :)