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I do have a tendency to be a bit long winded. I'll keep your suggestion in mind for future posts. I'm still pretty new at this so I'm still trying to get a feel for what works best. Thanks for the feedback!

Yea experiment for sure, because there are lots of different types out there who like different formats. I was just giving my 2 cents, I thought the content/writing was good and I followed to see future posts :) I will end up finishing the article because now I'm kinda curious lol keep up the good work.

Thanks! I followed you and look forward to seeing your future posts as well. =)