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Hello @rlt47, I always like to learn something new, the most beautiful thing of this group has been to know different cultures, I give you this haiku, I hope I have learned something.
We are like the loose wind
In love you win and lose
There is always a good reason.

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     6 years ago (edited) 

    Hi @rvag5, congrats on your first Haiku, so as it needs 5-7-5, yours currently is 6-6-8 so I have made a slight corrections below.

    We are like the loose wind (6 syllables)
    In love you win and lose (6 syllables)
    There is always a good reason. (8 syllables)

    My version
    Love comes like the wind (5)
    Love wins and lose without clues(7)
    We long for true love (5)

    Hope you will like my version :D

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