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     6 years ago  

    Hii @rlt47 the gif looks very heart-wrenching. women pushed men with anger, apparently the limit of patience is gone.
    such is love, sometimes it hurts.

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       6 years ago (edited) 

      Hi @rlt47, Greetings from HHG9! Here's an upvote for this lovely Haiku and also my counter Haiku lol :D

      Failed Love
      Come when love is gone
      Missing someone that we love
      Faded Like wind blows

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         6 years ago (edited) 

        on the topic

        Hello @rlt47, I always like to learn something new, the most beautiful thing of this group has been to know different cultures, I give you this haiku, I hope I have learned something.
        We are like the loose wind
        In love you win and lose
        There is always a good reason.

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           6 years ago (edited) 

          Hi @rvag5, congrats on your first Haiku, so as it needs 5-7-5, yours currently is 6-6-8 so I have made a slight corrections below.

          We are like the loose wind (6 syllables)
          In love you win and lose (6 syllables)
          There is always a good reason. (8 syllables)

          My version
          Love comes like the wind (5)
          Love wins and lose without clues(7)
          We long for true love (5)

          Hope you will like my version :D

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