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RE: Poetry for my friend.

in #life8 years ago

I'm sorry this is so late; I think your friend 's birthday has come and gone. I like the poem but since you asked for feedback, 😊

The word 'handsomely ' should probably be just 'handsome '. Since I think it's meant to modify the unnamed noun 'you'.

Also, the line 'I think I see a little like me' maybe change 'like' to 'of'. It is a colloquialism but it's very flattering to say this to some one so good choice. 👍🏽

I hope this helps. I like the poem and always love reading original content.
Take care.