Hey man this is an amazing poem. It's really cool how many consistent ideas are packed into one cohesive overall message. It seems like lots of care was taken into writing this.
Keep it up!
Love Jordan
- Ps I'm the guy that sat with you on the bench on top of that apartment up the big hill in Acapulco!
Thanks Jordan! I remember you for sure. Yeah it took some time and I think I could keep picking at it and picking at it but at a certain point I just had to get it out there. I'm glad people can see it, people read it, and think about it. This whole steemit thing is a great platform. I think the more you post the more you grow and learn and kind of figure out your style, art, or how to be effective on this platform. Sharing is caring. :)