The First Story I Have Ever Written

in #life6 years ago

(12/04/2018)

                   Today is the day, I finished my exam. Hmm .... today was not so a special day but somehow today was the birthday of my someone special. But do you know I have not any dare to wish her first because I don't even know that her birthday was today? Then also she gave the first birthday chocolate to me, I was really happy getting that first chocolate from her but... I am not only the one who loves her because in my view she is the most beautiful in our class. And unfortunately, my best friend has also crush on her. So, I have not ever thought of proposing her and the main thing  I didn't get any time to buy her a gift this was the most guilty thing I experienced today.  But I am happy to because my best friend gave her a suprise party in his home. 
                      So thinking about things only i have been depressed in which i am suffering from the headache.  Todays  incident is this much only and now i am very hardly suffering from the head pain ...
                          Have I done right work leaving my crush for my best friend or not.........

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You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

But I am happy to because my best friend gave her a suprise party in his home.
It should be surprise instead of suprise.

thanks for correcting my mistake but sometime it will happen while typing ......