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RE: Journey (Original Free Form Poem)

This was beautiful. I love how you portrayed the butterfly as a piece of art, but yet it retains its natural value and it's not artificial through brush. It elevates that feeling of natural beauty. I enjoy this.
The last stanza is vague - which I like. The journey will end too soon - is that going to be a bad thing? Who knows? I like the way that the ending leads to different possibilities in our heads.

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Thanks!

These days I'm almost writing more poetry than fiction, it seems.