Your story reminded me of the old days when I went there with some friends. We climbed the mountains of Montalban. They were called Bernardo Carpio mounts by the locals and the cave had the same name. Thanks for sharing this, Ms Sofia.
Thank you, @timliwanag. Binakayan and Pamitinan are the twin mountains in the story. Pamitinan Cave was turned into Katipunan hideout during 1894, I guess. With punit cedula and all. Haysss! Sayang ang papel. Re: Bernardo Carpio, you can see his handprint and footprint, too.
Good job motivating @sofiaphr join the contest. These are effective ways to bring out the best of our young generation writers to push themselves to be good at.
A masterpiece! The typos and minor grammar lapses make this great and typically written by amateurs joining the contests and should not be joined by pros in order for these young generation writers to enhance their skills. Given me goosebumps right at here:
I want to commend you for making me read your story from start to finish!
A real young person doing the writing and not a pro pretending to write on a teens behalf. Go for the win dear girl!
I just enjoyed sharing this story because this is not the typical story that I usually write. I am not into supernatural really because I always feel like there are eyes poking at my back. Thank you for the appreciation.
Definitely a challenge when you can still do good even if it is not the usual thing posting you are good at. And can catch the interest of a blogger of controversy. Though I still haven't started posting more of it yet since I am testing the waters of the steemit world for a supporting audience. For now, I do immerse myself with cryptos and sharing it through the steemit platform :) Keep it up!
Thank you very much @sofiaphr for writing this story that I enjoyed reading, and submitting it to SWC. I sent 14 STEEM directly to your account for your participation in the contest.
Oh, my gosh!!! Thank you soooo much. I was inactive for a while because I've been busy. Thanks a lot!!! Hugssssss!!! This is sooo inspiring and encouraging. I am sorry I was not able to thank you right away.
Your story reminded me of the old days when I went there with some friends. We climbed the mountains of Montalban. They were called Bernardo Carpio mounts by the locals and the cave had the same name. Thanks for sharing this, Ms Sofia.
Thank you, @timliwanag. Binakayan and Pamitinan are the twin mountains in the story. Pamitinan Cave was turned into Katipunan hideout during 1894, I guess. With punit cedula and all. Haysss! Sayang ang papel. Re: Bernardo Carpio, you can see his handprint and footprint, too.
Good job motivating @sofiaphr join the contest. These are effective ways to bring out the best of our young generation writers to push themselves to be good at.
@fycee, I didn't motivate, Ms Sofia. She's already motivated ^_^
A masterpiece! The typos and minor grammar lapses make this great and typically written by amateurs joining the contests and should not be joined by pros in order for these young generation writers to enhance their skills. Given me goosebumps right at here:
I want to commend you for making me read your story from start to finish!
A real young person doing the writing and not a pro pretending to write on a teens behalf. Go for the win dear girl!
I just enjoyed sharing this story because this is not the typical story that I usually write. I am not into supernatural really because I always feel like there are eyes poking at my back. Thank you for the appreciation.
Definitely a challenge when you can still do good even if it is not the usual thing posting you are good at. And can catch the interest of a blogger of controversy. Though I still haven't started posting more of it yet since I am testing the waters of the steemit world for a supporting audience. For now, I do immerse myself with cryptos and sharing it through the steemit platform :) Keep it up!
I fell into a lake when I was five. It was a very scary experience! This is a great story and good writing. I enjoyed it!
Keep it up!
Thanks a lot. I wish I could write something like this again. Thanks for the support. We are blessed we are still alive.
Thank you very much @sofiaphr for writing this story that I enjoyed reading, and submitting it to SWC. I sent 14 STEEM directly to your account for your participation in the contest.
Oh, my gosh!!! Thank you soooo much. I was inactive for a while because I've been busy. Thanks a lot!!! Hugssssss!!! This is sooo inspiring and encouraging. I am sorry I was not able to thank you right away.