I'd quote a favorite line but I doubt you want me responding to you with your entire poem... tip!
I feel like a hollowed water jug from reading this. Beautifully crafted but, emptied, full only of echoes.
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Well, I'm sorry if you feel like that but, in a way, I immensely appreciate your sincerity. This poetry, in fact, is not aimed to provide a nice feeling and so it means I reached my goal. The point of this poem is to portray the struggle of trying to sing what can only be guessed but not felt. Sometimes I wish I could cry but I don't have tears. You Brisby always amaze me for your empathy, it's incredible.