Remainders in Tattooed

in #isleofwrite7 years ago

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Burnt lumbers leave its ashes
Consumed by hell fire of desires
The thoughts of you hinders my vision
Deprive my deafening silence at night
As it burns ablaze our passion
But eventually fades to fumes of greed
Won't dive to its booze
When integrity still stood firm


You're dangerous, it seems
A maven and I am naive
Anxiety leads my despair
For I am true from what I felt
Pessimist leads me here
Because I know it won't be clear
Like a delusion from my fantasy
I don't want to be stuck eternally


Let the rain pour as I leave you
A convict of malice, am I or not?
Judge me as I concede
But I suppose it's the best for us
Remainders of you tattooed my mind
Seems irrevocable and embedded
Like a dreadful history that tainted people's mind
Should I cherish it or perish?



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I really liked the last line. It had a great rhythm to it, and I felt that it conveyed the sentiment of the poem well. Good write.

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