I think you posted another poem here. You really should do a verification intro. You'll connect with people better.
Another hint from one newbie to another: Try to use the #minnowsunite. This will get your work in front of other minnows dedicated to helping the community make it to the next level, as well as some more established folks who are generously working to help us along.
Also, many newbies are having trouble understanding the importance of and ways of accumulating SP. Please do yourself a favor and READ THIS. Failure to understand this process can lead to a sort of shut down of your account's capabilities to participate.
Best of luck!
I have done the introductory post! Please check it out. Now also will my account get shutdown?