This is my third attempt to write a comment.

I have read all your poems/writings - I think you achieve a nice flow. I see so many poems where the writer uses words because they are complex. Poems are not just story-telling; they are also a magic achieved by the way we create a rhythm. Poems may not be music, but they should dance in our minds. It is far better to use simple, everyday words, or else the reader has to pause to try and understand what was said. To me, poetry is art for the heart and mind, not just for the mind.

Your painting: I get the feeling you are experimenting. However, one thing is obvious, you have a good sense of colour. Colour is what makes your painting come alive.