Ah thankyou for taking the time to give some feedback i do appreciate it. Yes i was half thinking this is longer than i would be happy to read, but half thinking if it's going to be a weekly thing then maybe it should have more than a couple of things on it. But yes people are very busy on here and so i want to encourage people to read it not deter them, hence asking you lot for some feedback :D. Ill shorten the next one.

Thankyou!