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RE: I Need To See You (A Poem by Ren)

in #inspiration7 years ago

I need to feel the air you breathe
I need to experience the raw talent of your creation
That’s making it happen in the now
What is it on the real that you actually do?

What an amazing poet i need to see you, i need to feel the air you breathe what an emotional part of the poem...it makes me to remember who i have seen for a long time, the mask on her face is the distance. Such an emotional lyrics in poem...what a great and true poem @rensoul17 it is much amazing i really love it...

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Thank you @franklinolas, thank you for reading.