@egotheist I have changed it according to what I understand from the conversation, if there is still error please help you. thank you for the information you have provided.
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@egotheist I have changed it according to what I understand from the conversation, if there is still error please help you. thank you for the information you have provided.
You did well :)
Just one more thing: your references should be credited with more precision. Just provide the exact links to your sources.
@egotheist edited, thanks alot for youre time :))
Well, I know, that I may seem narrow-minded, but I'm not satisfied with the referencing ;)
Just using "wikipedia.org" or another website with its main page is not proper referencing. I assume, you have used certain sources to write your article - just link the exact websites you've used.