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RE: The City of Mages - Part 4/7 (D&D story)

This chapter was so intense! Mary's frustration and disillusionment really come through here, especially when she realizes that those in power may not always be the heroes she imagined. The complexity of Francesca’s motives makes her a fascinating character—cold and strategic, but you can almost see her perspective, even if it feels heartbreaking. And the reveal about the last Emperor and Trax’rion’s past actions was such a surprise! It adds a deeper layer to the stakes and makes you wonder just how much more there is to uncover. Can’t wait to see where this leads!

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Thank you for your comment, I was thrilled to read it!

I hope the story doesn't disappoint from now on! ❤️