Great text! I sure need to read the first one. But...
... "He had shown deference to no one since. But I have just seen him bow to a quack"
Without any previous information I instantly thought the Magister bowed to a duck, and this will forever be the mental image I have while reading this story XD (if I had time I would do a fanart of the Magister bowing to the goose of the goose game XD)
!1UP
Forgot to mention that you did use some pretty icons there on the image ;D ❤️
hahaha! I hadn't actually thought of that! Would love to see that fanart! !PIZZA