The Hunter's Instinct, Chapter 3: An Unlikely Companion

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"I've got a proposition for ya," you reply, ignoring the pert query, "what says you and I partner up for a while? The greenhorn the Hunter's Collective saddled me with went and got hisself killed, and you're obviously in need of someone to watch your back out here. You help me secure the bounty from the hell-bitch I came to kill, and I'll give you 20% of the cut."

His face contorts a little, clearly displeased with the potential payout but recognizing fully his lack of position to negotiate.
"Make the cut 30%, and you got yerself a deal, mister."

Impressed by the brazenness of his response, you nod your head, and slowly lower your rifle, allowing your new partner to slowly rise to his feet. Before his hands have a chance to fall down to the holsters at his hips, you whip your own revolver out of its holster and cock the action in one swift, fluid motion, the barrel pointing right at the boy's chest.
"I've been at this for longer than you have, boy, you try anything funny and it will be the last thing you ever do, y'hear?"

"Yeah, yeah, yeah, I hears you loud and clear, a'right? You can put yer damn gun away, let's do the job and get the hell outta here."

Just as deftly as it came out, your revolver returns to its holster. You nod in agreement and turn as your new gun-slinging partner known in these parts simply as "The Kid" joins you in wading through the swampy water of the bayou, but you're left with a choice:

(A.) You take point. Your own experience and expertise as a Hunter gives your new partnership an edge over your adversaries, and years have tempered your judgment enough to make cold and calculated decisions in the heat of the moment. BUT, you leave your back somewhat vulnerable to your young and impetuous new companion.

(B.) The Kid takes point. This allows you to keep an eye on him, and he can serve the purpose of a bullet-sponge in the event of a firefight. However, he is less experienced and more foolhardy a Hunter than you are, which could put you in a sticky situation that could have been avoided.

Better let The Kid take the lead. Not sure if he can be trusted, and it's better to have his head poking around first instead of mine... might make the difference in me keepin' it.


Chapter 3: An Unlikely Companion

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With an open palm, you gesture as if to say "be my guest." He pauses for a moment, eyes flitting between your outstretched hand and your face. After realizing that you have no intention of leading the way, he smacks his lips and begins to walk in the direction you indicated with a look of chagrin.

"Don't suppose you could, uh, y'know... tell me where it is we're goin', could ya?" The question was posed with a poorly veiled tone of annoyance. "Or was you plannin' on babysittin' li'l ole me outta here?"

"I heard tell of a beast needin' put down at the graves nearby the old chapel. You familiar with it?" You respond.

"Yeah... I reckon it's been about 5 years since I been there. Folks didn't take too kindly to me and my brother tossin' rocks up through them fancy colored windows..." a mischievous grin crosses his face, "taught them to take tithe and put it towards pointless shit!"

"Funny," you respond, "you don't strike me as the religious type... or to have a moral compass to speak of, judging by the general irreverence of your speech."

"Ha! Naw, I ain't religious. Just felt right to stick it to them self-righteous pricks up on the hill," he retorts defensively. "B'sides, if they believed what they was preachin', they'd put that money in the hands of the poor folks 'round them, not the fuckin' building."

You give a nod of assent. Hard to argue with that logic.

"I'm headed that way, anyhow. Got myself a job there'n needs doin'."

"You? You have a job?"

"Well, yeah!" He exclaims indignantly, "Why else would I be out here in this fuckin' shithole with them rotten bastards all about?!"

You raise your hand in a disarming gesture. "Fair enough, kid, I meant no harm. Though I'm supposin' that cut I offered you to be a bit disproportionate now..."

"Dispro- Di... Dispropo- what the hell does that mean?"

"Nevermind. Just thinking out loud. Let's cut the chatter, we're likely not the only ones out here with a contract."

Your unlikely partner nods in agreement, and continues to press on through the mud and tepid waters ahead. A mixture of swampy waters and dry patches of land stretches out in front of you. You would have preferred for the carriage that brought you here to have dropped you off a bit further in the swamp, but the path was too dangerous - riddled with the undead and unsavory characters alike. Typical, that when the modern world as you know it comes to an end, civilization crumbles and the baser motivations of men has a tendency to overcome their more altruistic sensibilities.

Hell broke loose in more than one way, it seems. At least, it brought out the hell in many ordinary men...

You continue to press on, sloshing through a section of particularly deep, but traversable swamp. The water creeping up almost to your waist. In order to keep your guns dry, both you and Turner draw your weapons from their holsters, holding them above the water as carefully as can be managed. Ahead there are several boardwalks, a smattering of small, makeshift shacks long abandoned by their former inhabitants, and a lazily sloping incline leading up to dilapidated structures of red brick and stone.

We're getting close. Best make ready to face the hellthing that lurks within...

As these words form in your mind, Turner goes stiff in front of you, then whips his head to look down and to his right, leveling one of his pistols at something in the water. Before you have a chance to intervene, he fires a round into the water - the blast ringing out from the muzzle of the revolver is amplified across the still water of the swamps around you. You stand there in stunned disbelief for a split second before quickly checking your surroundings for signs of movement. What the hell was that, boy? It doesn't take long for this immediate thought to come out in an expression of frustration.

"I felt something grabbin' at my ankle, didn't want it pulling me under or somethin'!" he objected. As you draw a breath to further reprimand him for his foolishness, you see just beneath the surface of the water a faint outline of what seems to be a corpse drifting slowly away.

Maybe the kid was right, maybe a grunt was lurking underwater and was roused by our movement... a knife still could've done the job just as well, though.

Before you have the chance to form another thought or phrase, though, a blast rings out from a distance and the water nearby explodes as if struck by lightning. Shit! Cover's blown!

"FIND COVER!" You yell to the stunned Jenkins boy, who still seems to be processing the events of the last few seconds. "IF WE STAY HERE, WE'RE AS GOOD AS DEAD!"

Another report from the far bank travels out over the still waters and an invisible projectile collides with a cluster of cattails nearby, cleaving a few of them from their stalks. This seems to cause Turner to snap back to attention and frantically begin wading through the murky, muddy waters towards the boardwalk and shacks not far ahead. Adrenaline is coursing through your veins, and though the water and mud are deep and deterrent to your advance, your body and legs push onward as if with a mind of their own and only one objective: survive. Another shot. This time, you can hear the zip as the bullet whizzes by, mere inches from your ear. Too damn close!

Moments later, you reach the nearest shack and burst in through the door. Turner isn't far behind you, breathing heavily from the exertion of running for his life through the mire. He leans against the door, a revolver clutched in each hand, readying himself to either continue running from cover to cover or to stand and fight. You've already stabilized your own breathing and reset your natural adrenaline response to steady your breathing and your hands - increasing your ability to shoot with deadly accuracy.

"Well, kid, looks like it's time to earn that 30%!" You state with a wry smile. "Let's go hunting..."

He takes another deep breath, readjusts his grip on his revolvers, then gives a quick, succinct nod. It's going to take the two of you working in coordination to get out of this alive, but you're left with a choice:

(A.) Stake up here and wait for your attackers to hopefully reposition so you can see where they are and return fire from a distance with your rifle while Turner watches your back.

(B.) Have Turner rush out the door to the next shack or two in the hopes of drawing some fire from the bank, giving you a bead on their position but separating you and Turner.

(C.) Continue to move together, leapfrogging from shack to shack, in the hopes of closing ground between you and the brick and stone of the cemetery. Potential for better cover, but greater risk for both of you.

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Absolutely first rule of combat is never stay in the same position. Make effective use of cover and get off the X. X being wherever you're currently at.

There is no better defense than offense. The house is unknown at this point and the construction means that it is concealment not actual cover.

Closing the distance is important. So is making you use of cover.

So I'm guessing you're voting for C? Just clarifying because I want the tally to be accurate. Thanks for reading! !PIZZA

It's the only choice for survival....

Alrighty! I'll mark you down for C! Can't wait to see what happens here, this is the first time my readers have been divided in their opinions at all! So exciting!

Yeah well if there was some more knowns then that would be one thing however since there's really not too much knowledge about the environmental surroundings closing with your opponent a smart idea.

Hmmm, tough choice this time around, but I think I'm going to go with A

Lol, good! The past couple of chapters, I was trying to create choices that were both viable with their own pros and cons, but it seemed like there was one clear "right" answer. I want it to be more complicated than that, like every answer is a viable option with its own risk/reward balance. Hope I did that well this time! Thanks for your vote and for reading! !PIZZA

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I will go for option C!

Duck for better cover and change position ever so slightly so you don't get blocked in. But sticking together so you can still co-ordinate with the Kid. After all, it is not like the two of you have a long history of co-operation yet.

Cheers!

An astute observation! Thank you for your vote and that insight, it will be very interesting to see how the Kid is as a hunting partner. He's already shown himself to be a bit impetuous, hope that doesn't work against our favor!

I'm rolling with C

Can I vote with a community account? Lets find out!

You sure can! I'm putting you down for C as well! Thanks for the vote and the attention, I'm looking forward to writing more of these and making Scholar and Scribe their home!

I love this concept!

I like this Turner kid (his logic in religion) so I won't sacrifice him. I also don't like staking out so my choice would be "C" also because I just love moving around in-game 😂

Hello, two months later! I have to admit my humanity in this case, I was going back through all my old posts to ensure I didn't miss anyone on my reader's list, and I realized that I completely missed your vote, and I'm SO sorry! I have added you to the reader list moving forward so that you can continue to participate and interact with the story. I've released a few chapters since this post as well, I recommend catching them here. There should also be relatively painless navigation in all the posts to "turn pages" more easily.

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I'm gonna have to go for C as well. No sense taking out what little you have in manpower for later use.
Plus a little more risk could be the bigger return.

C seems like the best option for them.

I love this story and I'm so glad I was able to find it so close to it starting, I love the setting, and the idea of doing this as a choose your own adventure is a great idea too! Looking forward to the next part!

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It's a tough spot but I am going to choose Option B. Best to reposition and get a bead on them to take them out ASAP

I had thoughts on Option C but the shooters would only pursue them into the maze that is the cemetery and things could get difficult with monsters, hunters, and a just met partner to worry about.


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Hmm, that´s tough.. I will pick C.

That's what the community ended up majority voting, so you picked well! I'd be interested to see what you vote in Chapter 5! Community is pretty divided now, and though I've "closed" voting for it so I can begin writing it, I would make an exception for your vote!

Thanks for continuing to check in with the story! !PIZZA

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Wow. The suspense is killing me. 🤣🤣
I would choose b but since this was written two months ago let's just jump to the next chapter and see what happens. 🤔🤔😁

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