Show and Tell through the 5 Senses

Do you remember when you were younger and you had a show and tell day at school; a day when you were asked to bring an object in that was of particular importance to you and share it with your class? Sharing involved showing them the object, and often passing it around so that everyone could get up close and personal, while you talked about what it was, and what it meant to you.

At school, the ideas of show and tell were combined in a simple exercise. The show part allowed us to relate more fully to the object. We could feast our eyes on it, pick it up, turn it over in our hands, and feel its weight, shape, and texture. Depending on what was being shared, it might have given off sounds, or scents, or perhaps we were able to taste it. Gaining an experiential view of the object, we could relate more fully to what our classmates told us about it. We didn't just hear about how it made them feel, we got to experience those thoughts, feelings, and emotions for ourselves.

Let's stop for just a moment and imagine that someone had brought in a rose for show and tell. As it was gently passed around, everyone would have been able to smell the intoxicating bouquet from its sweet petals. They would have felt the juxtapositional sensations of its woody stem, coarse leaves, sharp thorns, and soft smooth petals. They would have been able to admire the beauty of the flower blooming in all its glory. They may have sampled a taste of its petals if they were adventurous! In short, they got to understand and relate to the thoughts and feelings of the speaker, about the rose, through the lens of first-hand personal experience. The show part of the presentation supported and complemented the tell, allowing the audience to be more fully immersed.

As writers, we sometimes forget that even though we only have our words to share with our readers, we can still give them the show experience if we use our words well to immerse the reader into our own experience of the scene we are writing about. Words are powerful and we have such rich and descriptive language available to us. We can show how much we love and appreciate the beauty of roses without actually uttering the words: love or beauty. Through sensory-based descriptions, we can relay the feelings and emotions of our characters by sharing how our characters perceive and understand the world around them, and how they respond to the sensory inputs they experience. Whether it be an object, character, action, or experience we are describing, we have so much artistry at our disposal.

The human body receives sensory information through 5 primary senses; namely:

1. touch - including skin sensations
2. sight
3. hearing
4. smell/scent
5. taste

If we want to immerse our readers, we don't want to tell them everything and leave nothing to the imagination. Rather, we want them to experience the scene for themselves and draw their own conclusions. When it comes to wanting to connect them with how our characters are feeling and to evoke specific responses from our readers such as empathy or sadness, frustration or anger, we need to place ourselves inside our characters, walk their walk, talk their talk, and see the world through the lens of their perspective. We need to describe how every sight, sound, smell, taste, or touch impacts them. Share what effect those sensory interactions have on their body, mind, heart, and soul, and how that may dictate or guide their character's responses, through their decisions and actions. You need to make the reader feel as though they are right there in the scene, seeing, feeling, hearing, touching, tasting, and experiencing your character's world alongside them.

You can find a great little article by @jayna written for @theinkwell that will help you understand how to use show in your writing to create more impactful stories. Top tip: After reading and assimilating the short article, read the comments too!

Show Don't Tell

Magical Realism

Magical realism is Reedsy's writing genre of the week and I thought it would be a great one to tackle this month for dreem-wotw. Shaelin Bishop, from Reedsy.com explains magical realism in a way that makes it understandable to most. She says:

"Fabulism, also known as magical realism, is the inclusion of magical elements in an otherwise realistic story. The catch — and what makes it differ from fantasy — is that here, the magical elements are never explained. They don’t need to be logical, but are instead symbolic: a way to explore themes or emotions by bending (or breaking) the rules of reality. The result is uncanny, strange, dream-like, but also human and tender.

Fabulism asks you to be wildly imaginative, creative, and to dig into emotions and themes that are so profound or bizarre that they can only be expressed through a little bit of magic. The need to be logical is removed, and you can let your imagination run wild. Let this be your chance to write something strange, experimental, or unexpected. Think about possibility, rather than limits. _{Shaelin Bishop}

You may come up with any story of your choosing provided it showcases both Magical Realism AND Show don't tell.

If you need some inspiration, here are a few prompt ideas for Magical Realism from the Reedsy site that you could use:

1. Write a story where a regular household item becomes sentient.

2. Start your story with it raining... anything but rain (eg: flowers, cutlery, seashells, running shoes).

3. Write a story where the laws of time and space begin to dissolve.

4. Write a story where your character is traveling a road that has no end.

5. Write a story about an artist whose work has magical properties.
   _{Shaelin Bishop}

   _{(Note: If you would also like to enter your finished piece into Reedsy's contest, see note at the bottom of this post)}

   

   Now... with all the above in mind, on to this month's prompt!

   We would like you to write a short story of at least 750 words in the genre of magical realism but ensure that you add at least one scene where you focus on immersing the reader into your character's world using the five senses and what you have learned from the article that I have shared. In addition, you can use body language to convey hidden emotions to strengthen the impact of your piece. Remember, you want to try to convey what you want to say without saying it directly.
   

   This month the Dreemport submission date is:
   Friday 1st March between 4 am UTC and 23h59 UTC
   This means that you have 5 days to write and publish to your blog, but please note...
   

   IT IS THE ONLY DATE AND TIMEFRAME WITHIN WHICH SUBMISSIONS WILL BE ACCEPTED FOR THE S3 R5 CONTEST IN DREEMPORT.

   _{The curation/submission cycle starts and ends at these times so there is unfortunately little room for flexibility. All valid submissions to Dreemport will be reviewed and ranked by public curators the following day.}

   _{Part of the grading process includes an allocation of points for engagement... but engagement is only assessed if you do Dreemport curation of the contest posts in Dreemport on the day following the contest submission date. Simply log in to Dreemport on Monday 4th March, curate (ie: read and engage😜), and rank the 5 random contest posts assigned to you.}

   

   _{The top 5 in Dreemport will automatically be shortlisted for grading for dreem-wotw prizes, alongside other entries of merit put forward by members of the grading team. We will also be able to access the top 5 Dreemport staff entries in the background and will run two contest pools to keep staff and public entries separate 😊}

   _{The dreem-wotw team will then use a Merit grading system that incorporates some aspects of the ORIGINAL Merit Grading Model developed by @scholaris and others added by @juliamulcahy in order to determine the winners.}

   _{If there are fewer than 5 entries in the staff contest pool, the dreem-wotw grading team reserves the right to award prizes only to those staff entries that are clearly amongst the top-scoring entries, considering all entries in both pools.}

   

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   This month Dreem-Wotw sponsors Dreemport Featured posts, Hive, and HBI, and adds to the Ecency point prizes.

   

   

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   Promotion draw:
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   Good luck folks and I hope to see lots of people taking part this month🤗

   

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   @menace123 @hadrianwild I was wondering if either of you would like to write for the contest this month?
   

   

   _{The Reedsy Contest
   If you would also like to enter your finished piece into Reedsy's contest, you will need to follow the link here. They charge $5 per entry but offer a top prize of $250. You would need to write for one of the five prompts shared, submit your story first to the Reedsy site, and thereafter publish it on Hive and share it in Dreemport. Reedsy has some excellent prompt ideas each week. You can also create a free account on Reedsy where you can publish stories written for their prompts, without paying the $5, and therefore not entering your story in their weekly contests)}

   

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