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RE: Detective Softly and The Nexus Pit of Deceit

It was a very entertaining story to read, it quickly took me to the end where the whole case is resolved. You created the characters very well, each with their own personality that is deciphered as the narrative is read, counterparts that complement each other and form a shrewd and efficient team. Very good work.

Thanks for sharing your story with us.