You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Dreem-WOTW – Focus

in Scholar and Scribe2 years ago

If captivating was a story, this would be it. Imagine how my eyes widened when I realized what it was all about. Obsession disguised as love. I feel bad for Penelope though. It's obvious she's lost her mind. I hope she didn't die. What a whirlwind of experience. I imagine every single word.🥰

PS: Your writing has gotten more amazing.😉

Sort:  

If she dies, she loses. If she didn't die she goes to prison and she loses!
A lot was missing from this story actually but I was so tired yesterday. Now That I look at it, there's a lot missing.

You're being too hard on yourself dear. Maybe it could have been better but that doesn't make this one any less beautiful. Rooting out for you.✨❤️

❤️❤️❤️