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RE: An Honest Politician

in Rant, Complain, Talk • 7 months ago

I think your writing style is getting more refined.

Your use of graphics to break up the text is getting better.

I think your previous use of graphics with each idea resulted in to many GIFs IMHO.

But your use of one GIF per paragraph in a paper dividied into three paragraphs is perfect.

As a corrollary to that thought, I think you did a real good job organizationally with this one:

  • short intro with three main elements
  • body divided into three paragraphs with one attributed to each of those three things
  • conclusion with rapid review of the theme, three things, and conclusion

I think you hit the ball out of the park with your structire of the post, highly organized, brief and nicely illustrated.

I also like the human element and emotion in the intro and the conclusion.

I think the brevity could be improved upon, because modern humans really can't read a wall of text.

Your efforts to break up the wall with both organizarion and graphics is a very good strategy.

I think if you combine it with brevity, you will capture a bigger audience.
IMHO

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     7 months ago  

    Thank you for the detailed feedback on the post.

    I intend to use it as my first template.

    It's the classic keyhole essay format I looked up online.

    Then remembered they taught it to me in high school, but I got a way from it because I have some much to say. LOL

    I am learning to break up the wall of text with pictures and markdown.

    We will see how this one is received by my audience.

    Thanks #1000fans