Hi, ranters. This is my firts post in this community. This post was originally published in Spanish. My dear professor @hlezama challenged me to translate it keeping the rhyme pattern. I don 't know how well it reads for native speakers, especially because of some literal translations of local terms (such as "stew," meaning a bribe or illegal business). It was a hell of a challenge, but here it is. Hope readers like it.
Appealing to verses and humor, I dare to write this story-in-verse about the state of abandonment in which the town of Río Caribe is found. The electoral campaign began and the people will elect more of the same. No problem will be solved; the rich will be richer; the old town, older and uglier; and the poor, well, just poorer. In these verses I tell you some of the reasons for my lack of love for this backwards town where, due to fate circumstances, I find myself trapped.
Angry Verses
1
Life in my little coastal town,
It is not that of yesteryears.
and the poor local always fears
re-electing a mayor clown.
2
The next elections are coming
And it is always the same crap.
They fuck us with a food CLAPtrap
like tamed trained idiots humming
3
The light goes out daily four times;
Sometimes for more than a damn day
And when it comes back on: How GAY!
People thanking them for the crimes.
4
Never mind if in the process
Refrigerators and TVs roast;
“Better times will come to our coast
We won with candidates express.”
5
The overflowing sewers reign.
Garbage floods our streets floor.
Where there was beauty before,
ruinous poverties remain.
6
Meanwhile our pretty goats and cows
wander leaving shit and horsefly
turning the town into pigsty.
Who’ll take us out of this drowse?
7
Down a cliff the town is falling.
No end to this nightmare in view.
The police procuring a “stew”
to get dough in every brawling.
8
So much wickedness must have done
Venezuelans in other lives.
Always walk without tens of fives.
Hiding ass with hands is not fun.
9
Thus, here we are and we still plough
While we don’t grow fully aware.
People’s patience runs thin, I swear.
I lost mine a long time ago.
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I do not have a lot of memories about Rio Caribe, except for the hospital. When we did not have doctors in Yaguaraparo, we were taken to Rio Caribe (it was the closest close-to-a-real hospital thing we had around.
I'm not surprised about the current state of what used to be a very touristic place. I have not been to my town in over six years. I can't imagine how it looks now.
Keep the good workYou did a great job with these verses, @hossman. Congratulations.
Stay there, this Is worse than ever
This is excellent! Thanks for posting in my community of fun here. It's good to see that @hlezama is challenging you to write this in English as well! Some things certainly do not translate so I get that for sure.
Places like Venezuela and so many others around the world are getting intentionally destroyed and it makes no sense. When we work and have the necessities, everyone prospers and these big businesses make loads more money. Oppressing us is sadistic and completely in their worst interest.