Oh my god this was beautifully written!! Especially this part;
hallucination is when the
evening breeze lacks oxygen,
a bewildered facial expression
when you witnessed
the summer sun sneeze,
or when ink like mine bleeds
fiery red, a semblance of
sacrificial black blood
That's just poetic genius mate, you did good!! 😊
I'm glad it appealed to you just fine. It means a lot hearing such kind words from you. Thank you!