The 31 Sentence Contest: Round 11 (Pooh love eat honey)

in STEEM CN/中文5 years ago

Pooh is a little bear living in the forest.

These animals in the forest called the little bear Pooh is "Pippi",because little bear Pooh is very love play and greedy eat.

Early in the morning, Pooh went out and played around.

Pooh passed through a forest and saw a honeycomb, and smelled the fragrance of honey.

Pooh hid in the grass and saw the bees flying away one after another.

After a while, the Pooh climbed up a tree next to him, grabbed the vine, swung it over, reached out his hand, and pulled out some of honey from the honeycomb.

After geting these honeys, Pooh ran desperately, and many bees behind him chasing .

Buzz,Buzz Buzz Buzz,Buzz Buzz Buzz.

These bees gathered very much, and the damn little bear came to steal their baby's food.

The bees are shaking their wings, chasing desperately, and biting Pooh, We will kill you the little bear,

Pooh ran desperately and a river appeared ahead, he eated all these honeys to his stomach and jumped into the a river.

I am very hurts and ches, these bees is very horrible, I only eating your some honeys!

hateful.

Pooh hid in the river, occasionally emerged from the water, took a breath, and immediately sank into the water, took a look at the bees.

After a while, the bees saw the little bear hiding in the water, and after flying for a long time in the sky, These bees flew away unwillingly.

Pooh crawled out of the river and walked go to his home.

along the way, Pooh very Aches and angrily said: I will finished stealing your all honeys, today stealing, steal tomorrow, steal every day, steal your all honeys.

Along the way, everyone look at Pooh and said, "Oh, Pooh, How are you? What's wrong with you? What's the matter with you? What's going on? Did you by hit?

Pooh hurried home and dare not look up at people, ran home quickly, and his heart was think: I was very no luck and I was seen by everyone. !

When little bear Pooh get his home, close these all doors and windows, afraid that there will be bees coming again.

Pooh found her mother and looked at her.

Mother Bear looked at Winnie and said: You're stealing honey again! You are a bear child, you are really bad.

A few days later.

Pooh was playing crazy in the forest, and he saw a new honeycomb, and his state was clear again.

Pooh was chased away again.

Ha ha Ha ha ha ha.

Run away.

Everyone laughed very big and said that bear child was hunted down again by bees, the little bear Pooh is very love play and greedy eat .

Pooh ran and said: I'm exercising, you don't understand my heart.

Everyone was speechless.

Some people think: Pooh is so Power, he is not afraid of death; and some people are thinking: greedy and invincible, really very admire.

My Sentence order:
9, 23, 10, 15, 14, 31, 13, 7, 16, 18, 22, 17, 1, 25, 28, 12, 27, 30, 29, 21, 8, 20, 6, 2, 19, 5, 4, 26, 11, 3, 24

@tristancarax organized an event "The 31 Sentence Contest",
now is round 11
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31个句子竞赛:第11轮(维尼爱吃蜂蜜)

维尼熊是生活在森林里的小熊。

这些在森林里的动物们叫小熊维尼是“皮皮”,因为小熊维尼很喜欢玩和贪吃。

清晨,小熊维尼出去玩了。

小熊维尼穿过森林,看见了一个蜂窝,闻到蜂蜜的香味。

小熊维尼躲在草丛中,看到蜜蜂接连的飞走了。

过了一会儿,维尼熊爬上了他旁边的一棵树,抓住藤蔓,把藤蔓摇过去,伸出手,从蜂窝中抽出了一些蜂蜜。

得到这些蜂蜜后,维尼拼命奔跑,后面有许多蜜蜂在追赶着。

嗡,嗡嗡嗡,嗡嗡嗡。

这些蜜蜂非常的多和聚集了过来,喊着:该死的小熊偷走了宝宝们的食物。

蜜蜂们摇动着翅膀,拼命的追逐着,叮咬着小熊维尼,喊着:我们会杀死你这头小熊,

维尼拼命地奔跑,一条河出现在他的面前,他把所有的蜂蜜都给吃进了肚子中,然后跳进了一条河之中。

我好痛啊! 这些蜜蜂太恐怖了,我只不过吃了一些些的蜂蜜!

可恶。

小熊维尼躲在河里,偶尔从水中冒出来,吸了一口气,立即沉入水中,看着蜜蜂。

过了一会儿,蜜蜂看到小熊躲在水中,在天空中飞行了很长时间之后,这些蜜蜂不情愿地飞走了。

小熊维尼从河里爬出来,步行回家。

一路走来,维尼很疼,很生气地说道:我会偷完你们所有的蜂蜜,今天偷,明天偷,添天偷,所有的蜂蜜的蜂蜜, 我都偷光光。

一路上,每个人都看着维尼说:“哦,维尼,你好吗?你怎么了?你怎么了?怎么了?怎么了?你被打了吗?

小熊维尼赶紧回家,不敢抬头看人,跑回到了家中,他的心里想着:我真不走运,每个人都看到了我。

小熊维尼回到家中时,马上关闭所有的门窗,以免蜜蜂飞进来。

小熊维尼找到她的母亲,看着她。

熊妈妈看着小熊说:你又去偷蜂蜜!你这个熊孩子,你真的太糟糕了。

几天之后。

小熊维尼在森林里疯狂地嬉戏,他看到了一个新的蜂窝,他又故态复明了。

小熊维尼再次被追殺了。

哈哈哈哈哈哈。

逃跑。

每个人都笑得很厉害,说熊孩子被蜜蜂再次追捕了,小熊维尼很爱玩又贪吃。

维尼边跑边说着:我这是在运动,你们不了解我的心。

每个人很无语。

有人认为:小熊维尼是如此的强大,他不怕死亡。还有一些人想着:贪婪无敌,真的很佩服。

我的句子顺序:
9、23、10、15、14、31、13、7、16、18、22、17、1、25、28、12、27、30、29、21、8、20、6、2、19, 5、4、26、11、3、24

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现在是第11轮
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My friend, I'm sorry. Something was misunderstood. You were meant to follow the my sentence order and not your own. If something I wrote was confusing, please, point it out.

If your connection to the prompt was a metaphor, the bees hive representing a locker full of stuff, then I got it. If this is not the case, then I missed the connection to the prompt for this round.

That begin said,

I loved your story. I grew up watching Pooh-bear, something I think I'd like to revisit now that I'm older. It is just about as you describe above. Pooh-bear can't keep his hands out of that honey jar! lol

Have you even read "The Tao of Pooh?" - I thought you were going to go here because of the book in the locker.

@cloudblade, I was very curious to see what google translate would produce. There is where I found that your sentence structure and grammar usage was much better than the English version posted here, even though the translation equaled 483 words. As you are the very first person to post in another language, I am curious to know what the struggle was between the two. Something that comes to mind is that because they are different languages, the translation gets fuzzy. Or, something to this effect.

I don't know english
I use google translate
Translate chinese into english
After translating into English
again Translating English to Chinese
If the translated Chinese is correct,
I posted it
As for translation
What difference
sorry
I don't know
If you have trouble reading
That's really sorry

拜托,不要后悔。我了解并希望鼓励世界各地的人们加入。希望我不要绕过您再进入。我不会说中文,所以我什至不知道翻译是否正确。

我确实认为,当我使用翻译器时,您的中文版本会很好地用英语显示,只是它比496个单词短。这可能只是翻译问题。我想问一下,因为是这样的话,所以我需要考虑到这一点,因为我确实希望世界各地的人们都能加入。

再次,我希望您这次回来,并以正确的单词顺序进行回合,并将其与提示相关。如果不是因为这两个问题,我会认为这是一场胜利,因为这确实是一本有趣的书。

如果此翻译对您没有意义,那么Google翻译将无法做到这一点。因此,请让我知道此翻译是否与您的正常发音完全一致。

@cloudblade, I just retranslated. My words got mixed around. My words weren't my words any longer. The meaning has changed.

This is troubling to me. hmmm

I will attend the latest
Just in the order you said
The English I provided was translated using GOOGLE
The Sentence counts is calculated according to the translated English

Because the Chinese Sentence before translation
And the English Sentence after translated
word numbers of Sentence are different

such as
beautiful = 美麗的
Chinese Sentence is 3
English Sentence is 1

Yes, I see the issue more clearly.

Thanks.

I may have to be more strict on having people work with translators and editors for it to be fair for all contestants. I didn't think about these issues that are coming up.

Everyone's English is so good
So envious
I may be the first to not understand English

so as like
People from Korea, Japan, Thailand, etc.
The number of words before and after translation is definitely different

You mean:
Does the order of the sentences have to look like this?
4, 20, 10, 2, 12, 12, 25, 18, 16, 6, 8, 31, 3, 22, 27, 17, 23, 29, 5, 26, 30, 13, 11, 21, 1, 14, 19, 15, 24, 7, 9, 28

So
I understand it wrong
I rely on translation of GOOGLE
I understand it as
Write articles in 1 ~ 31 sentences
I didn't note that I had to follow the order above

thank you tell me this
next time
I would note

For round 11, yes, the sentence order was that one. For round 12 it is:

22, 21, 27, 29, 2, 10, 15, 9, 20, 17, 31, 3, 28, 12, 30, 19, 8, 1, 25, 23, 13, 26, 11, 18, 4, 16, 24, 5, 6, 14, 7

Also, must relate to the prompt (picture).

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