When the sun was supposed to rise
In it's full glory,
When the darkness was supposed to pave way
For the morning light,
When brightness was supposed to dominate,
Alas! It was opposed and the sun set.
What more could have been disheartening
Than to realize that the morning
Has been snatched from its owner,
The chick has been stolen from mother hen,
The morning, the mother hen, lost their glory,
Alas! The sun set at dawn.
How will the morning maintain its name?
How will it not be exchanged with the evening?
How will the mother hen remain a mother?
How will it not be referred to as just a hen?
Alas! The sun set at dawn,
The day lost its light,
The light lost its glory.
Maybe another time
Maybe for others, there won't be sunset at dawn again
Affliction must not rise again.
Thank you for your time.
My pen doesn't bleed, it speaks, with speed and ease.
Still me,
My tongue is like the pen of a ready writer.
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Very cool poem I love the play on words that you used in this poem in general, usually in the city where I live when it is early sunsets appear at dawn and the roosters crow, but anyway I think you have to enjoy them while you can because we do not know what will be the last we have to see, great writing as always friend, Feliz Comienzo de semana ♥
Gracias, amigo. Thank you for your endless appreciation. I admire how you soak up the words and allow it ease out through your comments.. Thank you so much.
Gracias a ti amigo, I appreciate your words to my brother ♥
In life, there are always times of ups and downs, lows and highs. May tragedy never be our lot at day and night. I say Amen to your prayers, May affliction never repeat a second time 🙏
Nice poem 👌
And secondly in the evening when the sun is setting and if a person has gone to the top of the beach, then the view looks more beautiful there too and it is more peaceful during the time when the evening is falling. The waves of water are also flowing and the birds are also going to their nests, so this time is also very beautiful.
Amen and a huge Amen again to that. Affliction must not rise again the second time...that's the part of learning and doing better. Thank you so much.
This is the view that I like the most during the day because in the morning when the sun rises before the cold air blows, the birds wake up and their voices sound more beautiful and the people who wake up in the morning. If one walks during this time, then this person has many benefits and the life of a person is also prolonged by doing such actions, health is good and diseases are reduced.
Thank you, my ever consistent and intentional friend. Thanks for always being there and sharing a different perspective which is eye opening. Much appreciated.
Most welcome dear.
Intention. That is how I would describe this poem. Human interaction doesn't just happen, there is almost always an intent behind every action, and they all have various effects on each individual involved. It important to understand your intention, and confirm if it is aligned with those you are interacting with. This helps build a common flow of energy (vibe) amongst all parties, that would form a positive loop, reinforcing whatever intent or purpose that relationship seeks to fulfil.
DAy and night are Gifts from our God, they both have their own important, day is incomplete with night and night is incomplete with the day. Imagine, there is not night, and you are working continuously for about 24 hours, without even resting. will you manage it? Sunset and sunrise are beautiful moments. i enjoy them a lot.