That's a nice drawing and a good way to practice and get some drawing skills.
However, I see you need some guidance. You've been here for two days, so I understand you're new, but please focus on quality, not quantity. You had 6 posts in two days and a single comment. I'd advise you to focus on commenting too as engagement is key on Hive.
@erikah no wonder I am not getting the kind of reception I was expecting , I will take your suggestions and work on them..thanks..
I don't know what you were expecting, but having expectations and being entitled is the fastest road to disappointment. I'd suggest you focus on learning as mush as possible, read those guidelines, join a few communities you find interesting, connect with people and results will appear.