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RE: The Voices In His Head

in The Ink Well β€’ 3 years ago

Hi @agmoore, thank you so much for taking the time to read my story and for your valuable feedback. It means a lot to me hearing what you just said. πŸ˜‡

You are actually right about the lens still being out there, but what I had in mind is that the lens was used as an activation key for that family line. (The grandpa and his dad then him) Which later on became totally unnecessary to use. Meaning, not any person can get from it what Nathan got.

That said, the story could actually use some tidying up for a few "unresolved" bits and pieces in my opinion, but it is already too long. (Next time "hopefully" I will work on condensing my paragraphs too) πŸ™‚