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RE: A Ragya; Sheda!

in The Ink Well3 years ago

It's nice with a touch of old fantasy but would have been even better if there was a little struggle in getting lost in the woods first, the conflict was resolved much too quicker, I was expecting a little ordeal before realizing there was truly something more to the prophecy.
Still good story.

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Thank you for your honest feedback. I was a little worried about the length of the story.