Thank you for the feedback, comments and thoughts about my story. I appreciate it and it will help me improve. I honestly had hard time writing it with the proper plot because I'm used to flash fiction. But I'm glad that I made it.
I haven't joined yet. But I will. Thank you!
Funny, I’m used to writing longer short stories, so my challenge is writing succinct short stories or flash fiction. It’s great to try different things and flex your writing muscles. :^)