I read the first version yesterday. I love how you use the same first two paragraphs yet changing the story. Tsaka parang redemption na rin ng mother to na hinahanap ng iba sa comment sa recent story.
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I read the first version yesterday. I love how you use the same first two paragraphs yet changing the story. Tsaka parang redemption na rin ng mother to na hinahanap ng iba sa comment sa recent story.
Thanks bro! Yeah, I didn't changed it to the first two paragraphs, but rewrite the whole plot and twist in one go. Quite hard, I must say. Yup, I hope you guys like it too. 🥺