Thank you for taking the time to respond. Yeah, the Valkyries kicking each other was to show how green they were in the fighting arts and it was meant to be something of a clumsy start. Now that’s not to say that later parts don’t get violent, but no more than say Cobra Kai on Netflix (which I drew inspiration from for this piece).
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Hello fellow writer :)
Thank you for your openness. Artists (even if I don't write great fiction, I'm still an artist) have to be open to each other. That's how we grow.
Hope to see you around.