The Ink Well Fiction Prompt #190

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Stories from the Previous Week

Thank you to who posted a story for last week's prompt: "Scoundrel":

Author Shout-outs

We'd like to call out a few stories that got high marks from our curators this week.

@lightpen

Unjust Discrimination

Curator comment:

@lightpen writes a great story that stems from a conflict of interest between the wife and daughter of a deceased man and his relatives, in the traditional cultural setting of an African family. The reading is enlightening because it patents a historical social reality at a time when changes in laws are taking place. Being fiction it is an exciting story, even more so if there are glimpses of an emerging reality. The story has tension, good dialogue and an effective narrative.

@mmeyenejoseph

Timi

Curator comment:

@mmeyenejoseph writes a very compelling and interesting story about the children of wealthy, busy, parents who travel and are gone from home far more than they are with their children. This entails the kids being left with nannies and other hired help, who they do not respect. The kids are out of control and have to keep switching schools due to their behaviors. We know something has to give... but what? When the parents learn that heroin has been found in their daughter's belongings at school, they fly home to handle the situation. But instead of them just punishing the kids, they have an excellent way to deal with them! Read the story to find out what it is.

@balikis95

Natasha, Aaron and Mom

Curator comment:

balikis95 writes a powerful story for the scoundrel prompt about a young family dealing with the divorce of the parents. The story is told from the perspective of a 13 year-old girl who continually cleans up the terrible messes of her younger brother, who we come to learn is making them as a way of acting out in response to the father's departure. The sister takes the blame and is mercilessly yelled at by the mother and made to clean it up.

Only when the mother overhears the children discussing these misdeeds does she realize that her children are going through loss and sadness, and that is when the apologies come out and the three of them can begin to heal from their family falling apart. Very nicely told.

Fiction Writing Prompt of the Week

This week's prompt is: "Storm the castle!"

Well, we hope you guys have fun with this one! There are all kinds of possibilities. You can, of course, take it literally and write a story about an army storming the castle of their enemy. But there are many other directions you could go in as well.

Here are some things to know about the expression "storm the castle" from various internet searches:

  • Experts believe that this phrase started in the 1600s when enemies would attack by storming the castle of their opponents.
  • It can be used to indicate a political or professional attack by someone.
  • Since the 1987 movie, The Princess Bride, this phrase has become a way to send off a friend when they are leaving. In the movie, Miracle Max and Valerie say this line to wish Inigo Montoya, Fezzik, and Wesley good luck as they prepare to storm Prince Humperdinck's castle to rescue Princess Buttercup. "Have fun storming the castle!" they shout. It's a very funny yet dramatic and highly entertaining movie, if you haven't seen it.
  • The expression could also be used in a number of different ways in casual conversation. For example, two parents could be standing together in the kitchen talking, when they realize the children have become very quiet. The mother might say to the father, "Maybe they are getting ready to storm the castle."

We look forward to seeing your interpretation of "storm the castle" in your fictional story. (Note: Of course it must be told without violence, blood or gore!)

Good luck. Remember, as always, we are looking for the elements of story. These include:

  • Great first lines
  • Good settings
  • Well-developed characters
  • Integration of action, dialogue and narrative
  • A conflict that intrigues the reader
  • A "story arc" which results in the resolution of the conflict and brings the story to a satisfying conclusion
  • And of course, we are looking for well-edited stories that are not littered with typos or grammatical errors — please use the free Grammarly tool for grammar and spelling checks (and not AI writing or rephrasing tools for revising)

You can find more on all of these topics in the catalog of storytelling tips.

If you don't feel inspired by this prompt or the featured image, feel free to peruse any of our past prompts or our collection of idea-generators:

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Past Prompts

Here are the past prompts if you would like to use them or refer back to them:
#1: Heart and Soul; #2: The moment when...; #3: Beauty with a twist; #4: The Way Home; #5: A Matter of Time; #6 50 Story Ideas; #7 The Library; #8 All the way to tomorrow; #9 Legend; #10 Three Words; #11 World Building; #12 Childhood Summers; #13 50 Imagination Ticklers; #14 Railroad; #15 Cats - 750 words; #16 Your Birthday; #17 Action, Dialog and Narrative; #18 Change; #19 Tea Time or Tee Time?; #20 Summer Camp; #21 Main Street; #22 Fireworks; #23 Picnic; #24 Run; #25 A word of advice; #26 Winding road; #27 Mirror; #28 Shipwreck; #29 School Notes; #30 Three Words: Scooter, River, Midnight; #31 Flash Fiction Contest; #32 A Fork in the Road; #33 Shadows; #34 Three Words: Island, Witch, Cake; #35 Full Moon; #36 Graveyard; #37 Jack-o-Lantern; #38 Family Ties; #39 Longing; #40 Feast; #41 Gift; #42 Season of Light; #43 Believe; #44 Elf; #45 Holiday; #46 New Year; #47 Unlikely Hero; #48 Inheritance; #49 Under the Light of the Moon; #50 Three Words: Shoes, Mood, Adventure; #51 They're Here; #52 Artist; #53 Headlights; #54 Tomorrow; #55 Lense; #56 Perfection; #57 Making and Breaking Rules; #58 A Reckoning; #59 Blossom; #60 Temptation; #61 Happiness; #62 Footprint; #63 Frequency; #64 Sailing; #65 Fortune; #66 Worry; #67 Adventure; #68 Shadow; #69 Motor; #70 Embarrass; #71 Proud; #72 Guide; #73 Impression; #74 Lost; #75 Wonder; #76 Tear; #77 Splash; #78 Brilliant; #79 Sinkhole; #80 Exhaust; #81 Roll; #82 Wishbone; #83 Chatterbox; #84 Foil; #85 I can't believe you said that; #86 Boo; #87 Midnight; #88 Hunger; #89 Light; #90 Spirit; #91 Fire; #92 Tend/Tender; #93 Cheer; #94 Appearance; #95 Ambition; #96 Trust; #97 Fly; #98 Comfort; #99 Fate; #100 To Create; #101 Vision; #102 Sympathy; #103 A Special Time; #104 Suspense; #105 Bride, stairs, illusion; #106 Reality TV; #107 Things the Go Bump in the Night; #108 First line: Two strange things happened that day; #109 What if that loose floorboard was actually a hidden passageway?; #110 Footsteps; #111 Mess; #112 Cards; #113 Elephant; #114 Crystal; #115 Phone call; #116 Date; #117 Chocolate; #118 Three words: wish, button, sky; #119 RSVP; #120 Objets d'art; #121 Soul; #122 Scuttlebutt; #123 Recall; #124 Doorway; #125 Beacon; #126 Seagull, Market, Box; #127 Window; #128 Terrified; #129 Dance; #130 Two endings; #131 Ghosted; #132 Treasure; #133 Taste; #134 Reunion; #135 I miss you; #136 Wonder; #137 Ruins; #138 Beach memories; #139 There was something in the wind; #140 Mask; #141 Halloween; #142 Photo album; #143 Dreams; #144 Crayon box; #145 Back of beyond; #146 Intuition; #147 Delight; #148 Anticipation; #149 Holiday memories; #150 Resolution; #151 Bicycle; #152 Flight; #153 Time Travel; #154 A trip to the fair; #155 Don't sell me a dog; #156 Gravity; #157 Love, wheelbarrow, dog; #158 Stealing; #159 Sportsmanship; #160 Toast; #161 Pickle; #162 You only live once; #163 Ring; #164 Hope; #165 Dreamcatcher; #166 In mother's house; #167 Keep Out; #168 Chin up; #169 Dish; #170 Talking in your sleep; #171 Wish upon a star; #172 Diary; #173 Plan B; #174 Clown; #175 The good old days; #176 The shoe is on the other foot; #177 Will tomorrow ever come?; #178 Am I a fool for dreaming?; 179 The moment that changed everything; #180 Superstition; #181 Gypsy; #182 Blind ambition; #183 Ah-ha moment; #184 Never say never; #185 Things are not always what they seem; #186 Domino effect; #187 The elephant in the room; #188 Higgledy-piggledy; #189 Scoundrel

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