Hello @yeleisma2023. Thank you for writing in The Ink Well and for supporting the works of other members of the community.
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Your story was an interesting creative spin-off of Alice in Wonderland. I was intrigued with your perspective. However, we don't get to find out why or how the white rabbit ended up suspended between reality and fantasy, and I think this is an interesting part of the untold story. If this is the conflict, it is underplayed. We don't see the outcome and there is therefore no resolution and no arc to satisfy the reader fully. If you focus on ensuring these elements are included in your next piece it will elevate your stories.
I look forward to reading more from you. A refreshing read from a new writer in our community!
Hello, I had not responded to your comments because I had no internet connection, as we have some power problems. I really appreciate your suggestions, which would be more than guidelines; I have not found these aspects related to the suspense of the stories in the community description, it is up to the reader: the suspense, the assumption, the imagining of what will happen. Regarding the images, I do not know how to delete them and return to the post with others or simply without them, if you explain it to me perhaps I will be able to do so, because I know that I should not delete them and re-upload the post. This theoretical exchange is a pleasure, I plan to continue to delve into this community with your help, because although I am not a writer, from my profession, a professor of Spanish-Literature, I have learned about writing, although for a long time I have dedicated myself to the revision, writing and correction of scientific articles in the publishing house of the university where I work and apparently, I have lost some faculties in the literary text. If you tell me how to delete the photos, I will return to the post. Thank you and I hope to achieve the suggested instructions, since it is in this community where I feel free to put on the lines what my imagination dictates to me, which I cannot do in my work. Pay attention to your new recommendations.