Your writing is very visual, you transport us to a lonely place under the canopy, where your protagonist is going to perform an unspeakable deed. Fate intervenes and your protagonist realizes the value of life - it’s worth saving. Good imagery, well written.
Please remember to engage with other writers in the community.
Thank you.
Sure, I'll keep giving constructive criticism (even I'm not expert), my ideas and thoughts and keep engaging on other wrtiters' stories