Hello @treasure-joshua,
We could not figure out if this story was written in response to the fiction prompt (hunger) or the nonfiction prompt (travel). Happily, it fits in both categories. Since we are accepting both fiction and nonfiction pieces this week (and maybe for some time) it almost doesn't matter if this is fiction or nonfiction. What matters is that it is effective writing. The strong sentiment of Treasure for his grandparents is palpable. Readers can feel that longing, that nostalgia to see a dear relative that is missed.
Readers can also feel Treasure's hunger, both on the bus and at the grandparents' house, where ...there was always food.
Thank you for sharing this story with us, and thank you for offering meaningful feedback on other authors' stories.
(Please link the story to the prompt you are responding to. This helps us when we review stories for the week. Thank you!)
Good morning, the is a creative non fiction entry but I thought it would be cool in infuse the regular prompt, after all, it was "creative non fiction" anyways😂. That's why I added the part of saying it was written in third person and it was a story of me going to see my grandparents.
I've dropped a link under the creative non fiction prompt. Thank you for your amazing feedback.