You use vibrant descriptions and intriguing dialog to paint a picture of this group of teenagers. We are pulled in, as we walk with them to a mysterious destination. Your arc is very stirring, leaving Alma in many curious social positions.

One thing we would like to note, however, is that it was never resolved what the group hoped to find at their destination, or what Tina said to inspire them to hang out in the first place. Filling in some of these details would have given this a bit more well-rounded feeling to it. Regardless, this was a very nice read. Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.