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RE: Fall Of A Drama Queen.

in The Ink Well2 years ago

This is so delightful, yet heartbreaking, @tozill. Tavi has a strong personality and great aspirations. She seems like the kind of person who will get whatever she wants from life, yet in the short term her dreams are shattered.

It would have been great to see how her real life experiences relate back to her experience on the set earlier in the day. It seems like the story is making that connection. For example, does she think about how she has put too much of her own hope and trust in a man?

Thanks for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.

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I really appreciate the comment and maybe she didn't think too much about the role of Alice playing in her life. Maybe she was too much in a bubble in her own perfect life. Just maybe