Although this is a nice story, it would have been wonderful to see some editing for clarity and to catch typos. Here we find a powerful message of unity with nature told with a scoop of magic. Sadly, lines like this really jolt the reader:

" What difficulties you, my pals?" Lily asked, her voice full of compassion.

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