Thank you for your submission. Your piece offers an authentic glimpse of daily life and feels grounded in lived experience. It does, however, read more as a collection of anecdotes and reflections than a developed story or crafted creative non-fiction. Although it holds some interest, it lacks a narrative arc and character development. There is no central conflict and resolution. I would encourage you to read our articles on how to craft good fiction and creative non-fiction, and then focus on putting these elements into practice in your next piece.
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