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RE: LET'S HAVE COFFEE (A Short Story - Fiction)

in The Ink Well2 years ago

It seems you chose "romance" as your genre, @smc.arike.oba. Nicely done, and a good take on the prompt!

Just a bit of feedback: In a short story, it's usually best to stick with one character's point of view. In novels, sometimes there are different people telling the story, for example in different chapters. But in a very short story, it's hard for the reader to switch between characters' perspectives.

Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members. Keep writing!

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Thank you for corrections and for encouraging me to write.

I'll take note of this in the future 😊