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RE: The Transformation: The Ink Well Prompt #73 Impression

in The Ink Well2 years ago

Greetings, @samdove.

Perhaps the protagonist was very confused at the beginning of the story and was able to hatch a plan to harm the good king who gave him his trust.
When he thought of the innocent people he would harm with his plan, he came to his senses and acted honestly. It is hard to think that humans have such abrupt changes, also that the king would place his trust in him again.
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