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RE: Frosty Snowman

in The Ink Well19 days ago (edited)

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This is a lovely story, rich in nostalgia and offering a Christmas miracle. The mood in this piece is pronounced. Nice job doing that, @royaldiadem. We do have a couple of suggestions that would improve your writing in the future.

In many instances you do not close a comment with a quotation mark. Each comment needs to be preceded by and followed by quotation marks. Without these, it's difficult for the reader to follow who is talking.

Also, in the story you use the word 'loosing', when in fact you seem to mean 'losing'. If you look up the two words they have very different meanings.

Thank you for sharing this Christmas 'gift' story with us.

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Thank you so much. All correction are duly noted down.