This story works beautifully. You adopt the tone of a classic fairy tale from the first and continue the theme as you cast a spell on the reader. Charm abounds. Lucila is charmed. Naimed is charmed. The parents are charmed. All around spells are cast until the final scene where an evil spell is broken.

You do a fine job here, @rinconpoetico7. Your command of language, of mood, indeed of the reader, is expert. It was a pleasure to get lost in the charm of your writing.