You tell a good story, @raymondpeter. Mr. Samson's character is clearly drawn. The conflict at the heart of the story is also clear. Although you post this in response to the prompt, it is not clear to readers who the unlikely hero is. Perhaps it is old man who suggest Mr. Samson look disguise himself as a manual worker?

Thank you for sharing this story with the Ink Well community, and thank you for engaging with other writers.